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by The Fisherman

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sittin On Edge ~

Hot imagery here.

A lil play with words,

and a good flow of thought.

I like it.

On edge would be the proppppper

wording, of how it makes ME feel.

*grins*

More Plezz~

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Smouldering stuff

Very hot piece, sexy

imagery and a flow that

just falls of ya tongue!

Thanks for sharing

~ Jenn

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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A nice poem to wake up to, even if I have already read it! :)

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