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by Sean Renaud
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Magnetronalmost 10 years agoI think you could remove the comma from the last line.
Otherwise, nice job.
I'm rating this 5 inches ..... I mean, stars ........
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I'm a Veteran of the Iraq war and former Marine. To my Band of Brothers keep up the fight and remember there is life beyond the Corps. Love your time in it'll be the best time of your life. I love anything extreme and my mailbox being filled to the brim with feedback.
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