All Comments on 'Electronic Torture'

You have a sort of theme and variations here, with the refrains, and the progression from "friend" to "lust" to "dear" to "my love". For some reason, that seems to work really well with the very short, most one- or two-word lines. And I find the stanzas in the last section to be super hot. ;-)

were given to Ab Ovo. TK U MLJ LV NV

Mmmm weii evocation of when virtual becomes real. Deinetly hot not tepid water?