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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 17 years ago
Couldn't resist

this one, definitely my favorite out of your new three. The lines that hit me like a sock of rocks were

"Distant, clinical,

I note that they

were pretty,

like butterflies

nailed to a board,"

it captures the hardened stoicism of heartbreak pretty damn perfect. good work, post more :P

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