All Comments on 'Embracing the Moon'

.......typo -

Last night I reached out and touched the radiant moon,

My hands drawn to its golden glow,

It's always been up above the sky,

It will still be there when I [diet]. -

in the last line spoils, an otherwise, nice little poem.

Tess

I think your poem got bushwhacked by the cliche in the first line "radiant moon". Possibly, if if you considered eliminating words that are not absolutely essential without changing much else the result could be interesting