All Comments on 'Emerald Eyes'

Don't follow after all I might cry

When I come back

I will be wanting you, emerald eyes clear.

(That is SOME ending!)

I definitely enjoyed this. It hit home for me.

I think what was a little distracting in this piece was the second stanza with the question marks...and it almost felt unfinished in that particular area. Other than that, excellent work! Thanks for the read.

Hugs, saldne

this poem's power is awesome A~

the tears of happy sad etc.

from emerald eyes, I see a great

poet sharing her style with us and

thank you for the A~

dispite the verbal lashings from the

grammar police before, I don't see them now

your poem shines and I very ,much enjoyed it~

and I agree with Saldne about the question marks...somewhat disruptive of the flow. Still, a mini-masterpiece, and I feel better after reading it.