All Comments on 'Enchained'

<p>Excellent expression of Dominant feelings towards a submissive. I absolutely <i>loved</i> the content.</p>

<p>I did find the brevity of the lines to be a bit interruptive -- I would probably combine some of the lines in each stanza so the poem pauses less frequently, allowing the essence of each wave of thought/emotion to pack more of a punch.</p>

<p>Altogether, though, it's very well done, and obviously comes straight from the heart.</p>