by Sapphos Sister
This is an incredibly well-constructed and enjoyable poem, flows naturally, nothing forced - and OH SO VERY TRUE!!! (Take it from one of the male gender who wants all of that and more from his lovely bride of 27 years). Your Canuck friend, AverageBear
I liked this poem. I agree about the duality. I think its twinkling cuteness is also appealling. A different offering from you Sappho.
It was done well and everything, just the sort of topic I've heard a bunch.