All Comments on 'Equilibrium Intruded'

this one here just made my blood pump even harder than usual. I LOVE this part--

Idealism in grand, golden bloom

through inversion to perversion,

so disturbing, so alluring.

yeah, thats what it is, alluring :)

in all fruity forbidden fabulous

fuckitall fanfare

fanatic

fantasmagoria

fnah fnah fnah...

Ah....my need for aliteration has been sated again. I can always count on you. ;)

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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