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todski28almost 11 years agoThe last line
Could almost be a poem on its own, but if stands out by what was highlighted before it.
weepingangel88about 11 years agolets fuck!
LOVE IT! You have all this build up and then just cut to it! This is my favorite one of yours I've read so far!
demure101about 11 years agoWow...
After all the long, breathless introduction those two final syllables...
Braod grin!
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