All Comments on 'Evening Sin'

lovely sustained rhythm

So beautiful ❤️ what a wounderous sight

Wow! Very well crafted, the pace of passion matched beautifully.

Beutifull rhythm and such great hotwife poem!

That is one exquisite piece of writing. And erotica.

These are really nice. A welcome respite from the quotidian literotica.

hugs and kisses,

central

Masterful rhyming, keeps pace with the passionate rhythm!

The imagery and sensuality are insanely erotic!

Love the way your cuck observes and then is Queened with your creamed cunt.

Perfection!

I tried my damnest to answer this in rhyme, but all my efforts paled into insignificance when compared to this beautifully crafted, utterly compelling ode to a HotWife, her lover and her cuckold. It is a wonderful poem, and I prostrate myself at your feet. You are Mistress of the Rude Rhyme, the Dirty Ditty, the Perverted Poem. 5 stars seem pathetically inadequate for this superb effort. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

One of your best. Good work.

HOT!!! Tasty too

Nice! Very erotic but very powerful and intense. I love it.

Good and naughty, nasty delight!

Nice and hot and the same time. Theres something so hot about a woman that can’t say no. Just letting it happen knowing it’s the husbands job to clean up the mess.

It’s always the husbands job to look after his wife and clean her up after the other mans done. It’s his fault for not protecting her knowing that other men will discover the sweetness of her weakness.

Embracing his consuming emotions for her cleansing sensations. Love it.