All Comments on 'Evening Wear and Groceries'

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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I was doing something before I got this sudden urge to eat........ something.....

She must be quite a tomato. Now I am hungry as well.

ah this is a big smile from me! you make this look easy, and I certainly know it is not. well done, Tzara--

~sealace

you're not foundling cucumbers thinking about Lorca and Whitman - like old weird Al Ginsberg

Very enjoyable read, but I would like a better title and a rewrite of your first stanza. The rest of the poem is quite strong.

What does, ". . . on your hips." add to the second line, or " . . . of all people" to the fourth?

Recommendation: Put away and come back with a fresh V.P.

An every day slice turned into a teasing bite of poetry.

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poem Reviews"

witty-humor (~_~) I enjoyed your poem! Going for a snack now! <grin perhaps 'Candy' is available.

than a ripe tomato!!

best thing to do is pluck her and take a long, deep taste;)

very well done

maria