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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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looks like, you kept to your form. Try saying these things a different way:

In the darkness of the early morn

In the shadows of the day

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KobaKobaabout 13 years ago

Very good! I would be thrilled to death if a lover gave me such a poem!

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Loved it!! Very well done!

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