All Comments on 'Exit Rome'

This poem is good enough that it bothered me, at first. It just seemed like a lovely day without its sun. In other words, I felt like it needed a bit more polishing. But after a second and third read, the cadence improved for me. So, it may be simply fine as is, and I didn't see it on the first read.

I guess I'll read it again to be sure. lol

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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