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erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthortypo--line 2, line47 (changed by spell check?)
2, too=to; 47, to=too
correct punctuation "Lets try," I said
Angelinealmost 11 years agoVivid and true
and the ending is perfect. You know you can resubmit a poem if you want to correct things in it. The process is explained in the faq on the Stories page, but basically you just submit the new copy under the same title, and in the note section add that your new version replaces poem x. :-)
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erectus123@erectus123 Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...
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