All Comments on 'Face Fuck Book #143--Joesey'

Memory corridor , Erectus : you never cease to hold this reader's interest , curiosity & attention with your True-Life Tales !!

with a WTF, did you miss me? 5ed, I don't know what you are doing with this rambly ass thing, but it seems to ramble the right way, and damn some of the lines are fucking good. Any way congrats! The organization of some of the last are greatly improved over the rhymin coups and bloc o text approach. Poetry, I don't think so, but I'm often accused of the same thing. Here I would think about how much detail you want, but that is a value judgement. .

i also appreciate how you guide some of the neophytes in the jungle of poetry, hope you are well and prospering, or at least perspiring....of course I owe much to your guidance over the last year. best regards, I will excuse myself as I am headed for a dip in the pool with my little dog. Too much sex makes me long for a cool swim!

ps--don't pay attention to nasty comments, we on the site know your true worth!