All Comments on 'Fait Accompli'

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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...doesn't deserve this great poem. It's one of those that stays with you long after you've read it.

,don't we...thanks for pointing him out.

damn!! this is sinister, wow, maybe you oughtta leave your shadow in the cellar, good work!!

Now I really don't want to go to bed.

A tormented poem, TT, very dark and direct. Well done.

How about if my nemesis calls your nemesis, makes the derangements, we'll do lunch, over at Eve's.

Great set-up of scene, tt2u... sinister and dangerously good!

Ack! I'm reading things that relate to my life. Either 'once upon a time' or now. Damn SOB! No, not you!! Makes one want to take a bat to bed and smash his head!! Great read pulling the reader in- TO ANGER!

Very haunting...

The first lines pull the reader in. I love the line about to the tune of his whispers.

has been mentioned in todays reviews

to the tune of his whispers

hissing aloneness and despair~

Such imagery..Depth..Sadness...So few words, yet they pack a punch. Loved the poem.

I think as you say here, we are our own worst enemy.

I would hate to have him as a bed partner..I would kick'm out..Find sometone warm an snuggly..*Smiles*~ Sorry had to be said~ Darlin' made me do it~