All Comments on 'Fall Into History'

by RhymeFairy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
your arrangement

in this is well placed...I liked the theme as well..great ink...blue

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
excellent...

play with history (~_~) I enjoyed your poem <grin a well painted picture of past and present in one write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Neat-O

I enjoyed reading this, RF. Personifying skyscrapers was neat-o; I enjoyed the imagery you used:

'Watch sky scrapers erected

so tall, centuries of whispering they chant

calling to passerbys'

Your poem has great rythmn and works well on so many different levels. A clever piece of poetry, very enjoyable to read.

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