All Comments on 'Family Holiday'

by Remec

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Practised plastic speeches

Nice for imagining but so unsatisfying.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
verbal loss...

There are many losses - but the loss of the right words can be most disheartening and cruel. Lovely Poem!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
SILENCE...

is sometimes golden... nice write Remec (~_~)

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 17 years ago
oh

this got me, I think, just how you intended....

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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