All Comments on 'Fathers and Dads'

by MT_Pitcher

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perksperksalmost 20 years ago
posted on the new poems thread

timely, yes, but I'm not feeling this in a poem sense, or even prose. At times it feels a bit preachy, and I don't really agree with all of it, but that just talks of content. It reminds me of an email my mom will send me and a whole slew of others in about 4 years, and attached to it will be some blinking teddybear and hearts with a note that warns me of a curse unless I send it to all the people in my addy book.

But, I do feel that you were sincere and it was very heartfelt, so that has some merit in itself.

GoddessOfSoulsGoddessOfSoulsover 19 years ago
Nice

I understood this very well, reminds me of a plate I had long ago, words are not the same but the meaning is the same, I liked it very heartfelt

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