All Comments on 'Fault'

Childhood must be kept afloat by playing with it frequently. One never need be grown up--"stranded". Just consider yourself to be the same person, the child you were born, accruing time and memory, and in growth, not completed. How can one find fault in that?

The imagery leaps out and speaks volumes more than the words in which it is dressed. A new, powerful voice.

marginal compared to the poems you posted when you first came on Lit, are you trying too hard? I think so...