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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
WOW !

consider me fed and full of thought !

sGp

4degrees4degreesover 18 years ago
...

remenant of a

long thought

long gone day

where latex commune

and broken bones

were the norm

where animals spoke

with a fluency

impossibility

yet i see it open

wide, right in front

of my wide open eye

check again,

my erection is now

urgent

egging me on

to do something

unspeakable...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

A hallucinogenic poem, perfect for the story.

Well done.

Fly

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