by dreamsweet
how complicated that simple act can be.
and what goes through the mind.
I like this alot
the mind does one thing while the body does another.
very nice
thank you
Quite unusual,
definitely not your normal poem.
More like a well written scene in an erotic story.
Are you going to expand it?
But then thats what makes poetry interesting in the first place. But there is a raw sensuality about this that I liked. Enjoyed...
I remain, Thesandman
just on the edge of explicit, causing the reader to fill in the blanks - very well done
Loved this. I feel like you plucked the thoughts from my mind and wrapped them in wonderful words like a gift to me. Thank you!