All Comments on 'Feeding My Soul'

Loved this sweet poem. Makes a change from your erotic ones, but still as acceptable and still spoken from inside the real you. You have such a lovely way of expressing your feelings.

lovely poem Lil, you have a natural talent for writing and the wonderful ability to bring your words to life.

savoring the words...grin

the excitement in this poem. Your exhilartion is palpable. Nice work.

Wait until you dream words and poems... scarier, is when you day dream about them.

I enjoyed this, thank you.

upbeat and a day brightener!

The rushing beat of the flow,

showing a sharp mind afire;

pulling my breath as I read,

damn ~ I'm winded......