by joeys-game
I felt the passion of your pen (~_~)
Good perspective and a pretty good write, albeit a little uneven IMO.
The last half of it is outstanding. Could be a poem on it's own. :)
And sad. *kiss*
Could feel the passion
Hey darlin..a really deep poem.
Glad your okay!
Love you!
What could have made it stronger is a touch of concrete sample of those emotions just a touch.