All Comments on 'Female domination'

Got a tad careless toward the end:

"When laying there prawn on the floor.

Not to much pain that would never do

She will be a slave a slave for you."

Not sure what you meant with prawn ~ that's like a shrimp.

Change 'to' to 'too' and add a couple commas.

"When laying there prawn(?) on the floor.

Not too much pain, that would never do

She will be a slave, a slave for you."

indeed.

Well placed affection ~ willing to be enslaved.

Good poem. To me it showed Female Domination almost as an art form.