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Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
nice work

Hot water, steaming mirrors,

Cant see the reflection anymore

But I know she's still there.

Loved that bit,

a strong piece.

Thanx.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Editing?

I think this poem needs editing a little but there is a lot of good ideas in it and it is certainly erotic.

b'brig

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
deep and open

Like a whole ..

lot of good words

to make a great poem

<grin>

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