by My Erotic Trail
What can I say? Brilliant as always, as if I expected anything less than the best. Thanks for a great read and the huge smile :)
Dang!!
I love this image! however, ( yep, suggestion comin')
suppose you leave out "the opening" and the second "I" like this...
Satisfied with the nude cherry
I entered
over the threshold
and splattered my stain.
good work, MET. I am enjoying watching as you grow
hugs,
maria
these wee satires from your wabbit bag...you have gift of metaphoric humor...blue
I love the images you invoke here. The opening verse is classic. Truly erotic.
Tess
was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews of 8-11-06.
Loved this, Art!
Playful and powerful, you clever devil, you!
S&D
your erotic escapade of the mundane! too hilarious! you are soooo clever!
made me chuckle,Art. I loved your innuendo, brought a smile to my face.