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And I like the irony in the fourth strophe.

Ditto. Nice twist of surprise at the end that fit so well with what preceded it.

with all its twists and turns, but my favorite part is that middle stanza:

I am lonely. I want

us to join like this earth, like this sand,

in some violent and raging fire.

My poems are hack, but its cathartic and makes me feel better. You write well and it makes me feel a bit more alive. Connected. Thank you.