All Comments on 'First day of School'

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.

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this is perfect

no sentiment

just what the coldness

hard truth

facts

well done

...and extremely written tribute.

Great job hon. ;-)

ok, loved it, you waste not a single word, and hit us hard with truth, which happens to be so rare these days. keep'em comin' ;)

then the tears.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

to tell it all. good JOB

Because the subject matter gives me nightmares, and I don't want to do the homework! Sharp and succinct!

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