by Seeker n Finder
A lovely, elegant piece of writing, once again you have not dissapointed me with your words.
Only rainbows can compete with
your abundant prismed splendor.
I love those lines!
Keep em coming ~
I love these two lines:
Watching in awe the volley of
color spead across the meadow.
I'd make one slight change here:
Life's most lusious occasions are
when we stop to [sniff](inhale) your fragrance.
your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey