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Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Beautifully written!

A lovely, elegant piece of writing, once again you have not dissapointed me with your words.

Only rainbows can compete with

your abundant prismed splendor.

I love those lines!

Keep em coming ~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
some lovely phrases

I love these two lines:

Watching in awe the volley of

color spead across the meadow.

I'd make one slight change here:

Life's most lusious occasions are

when we stop to [sniff](inhale) your fragrance.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mentioned

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

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