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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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night prepares to come

a dark moon clothed in shadow

looks impassive at all those below

who would try and glimpse

her radient naked majesty

worn like a silver mask

leaving us to wonder

what cold delights await

hidden burning beneath

her blue diaphanous stare

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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night prepares to come

a dark moon clothed in shadow

looks impassive at all those below

who would try and glimpse

her radient naked majesty

worn like a silver mask

leaving us to wonder

what cold delights await

hidden burning beneath

her blue diaphanous stare

TathagataTathagataover 18 years ago
nice to see

your words here again.

They still impress me.

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