All Comments on 'for the GOD that failed'

Much anger and many mistakes

So much it hides any truth.

Written in the style of an angry young man who quit school too soon.

Rant? Angry? Very well could be. What you perceive in my writing is your own. Thanks much for reading it and taking the time to respond though. As far as "young man"..."left school too soon"...your a wee bit short on that one friend. Turnin forty this year. Been a member(unactive)of Mensa since I was talked into takin the test back in 85'. My typos and my misspellings are not a good indication of my intelligence. Just as my appearance is not indicative to the type of man I am. In truth, I'm just a US Postal Worker, with a long list of "might have beens" in my past. Peace to you partner...thanks for reading my "rants".

I can see the author reading this to a mesmerized - if slightly shocked - audience but reading it cold it loses some of it's power.

I can understand the typos etc made in the passion of birth but, maybe, a look over it to clean it up would help - if you wanted it cleaner. Some artists think the raw original is sacred. As I said in an earlier comment, keep writing.

If someone else's idea of God doesn't work for you, find your own idea of God.