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the ending kind of surprised me....cool little poem

I especially liked these lines:

a trinket of a girl

on a shelf, bent

over, displayed

for your viewing pleasure

but so wonderfully stated for innocent eyes....*LOL*. i've gotta agree with, bent over, on a shelf, displayed for your viewing pleasure. a package indeed worth checking out. nicely done......don

Of course you would be 'J' ready to fight if I were to take you as a trinket for I have many such trinkets under my sleeves to my joy.

Yes the temperature did rise but suddenly cooled down to fifty.

Congrats.