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wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 13 years ago
standard imagery visualised

and written in a new way. i like it. :)

could 'who shares your bed' be simply, 'bedded'? would it make any difference to the poem?

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
this

titters between poetry and "something you would send your girlfriend". Just reminding you there is a line where you lose half of the audience.

A5

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