All Comments on 'Forever'

by LilDarlin

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Marvelous~

a witty word wizared you are...sailed on a mental flight with the wind of your words with this one...<grin>

skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Last verse

If the last verse was meant for me I'll accept it willngly.

Lovely poem, well written, great sentiments.

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
a little more honey

I loved your poem, tender sweet ~ beautiful!

Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
Very good!

Even beautiful!

NevadamanNevadamanover 19 years ago
lovely and touching

this is so touching and sweet just like you at times lil it shows such a tender moment between to lovers it almost makes ya want to cry well thats my take any how.

keyen31keyen31over 19 years ago
sweet

this is really good, heart felt, with just enough longing to keep you

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