All Comments on 'Frankie Says Sonny's Working Late'

Literotic Poets : your wonderful sympathy 'n understanding of & for all the Underdogs , their vulnerabilities , their foibles in this 'n many other poems make us more humane , tolerant Human Beings : thank you for being you the Poet of the Dispossessed & the Cheated !!!!!!!

high 5-ed of course , need you ask ?!

Excellent - how you can put yourself in other's mind's so well...and clearly write what you find there

I can hear the gum cracking and the Four Seasons playing in the background. Sounds like home to me. Wonderful sense of place and a sly, revealing poem.

Go over the top of my head without Google this is a slick piece of writing, I can hear her voice in high pitched angered frustration, the hammer blow punctuation of the exclamation points give her real diction. The word play on the final lines is great where it ain't sonny ha, the undertone of being alone is hammered home as an undercurrent but it's understated by your surface structure.

As always 5 stars. Your ability to humanize your characters as Ash stated is remarkable.

Valli

couldn't resist the pun

now that you've been canonized

I'll just 5 and slip away

(They dont cry)

(Thats just an alibi)

I was going to complain about the lack of a bass part

(Tiffany chandelier)

(Big freak-in Deal!)

It's there.

Why do I get the feelin' I gonna catch shit for this comment, when you and maybe one or two others, know exactly what I'm talking about.

good catch

loving my finger where it ain't Sonny