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by Shadowsandflames

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CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
It hooked me from the beginning

and had a strong message that moved me.

Julia

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~over 18 years ago
wordless emotion

boils in my blood as I read this. It is strong, powerful,full of emotion and contained rage and pain that screams to be freed.

You portray a fact that is best preffered to be gazed upon by blind eyes, heard only by those with deaf ears. One of the many 'misfortunate unpleasantries of invasion we don't like to acknowledge'.Your angst is clear.

Thank you for this poignant poem.

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