All Comments on 'Fried Bananas'

Short and hot with some nice flavours - you convey the picture well with few well chosen words. I might suggest a change in

"Spatula hot slides

over stainless steel,...."

from "hot" to "heat", it's purely personal but, to me, it just flows better. I do like this poem.

Tess

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating is given so that it does not alter future temperature ratings. - wildsweetone