All Comments on 'Fucking'

tell him, let him, do what you want. Men love to be goaded on during sex. Welcome to Literotica. Just an observation on the line that reads. "But your other lovers." Maybe the word "But" would read better if it was changed to "That"

I can hear her saying that to me as I am fucking her. It is a meaty and gritty poem without being obscene. I like it.