by SeattleRain
the shark line is great
a shark falls asleep at my neck
I see speaker wires, proud and
black against apartment white walls
the band.
I had many a night like this also.
Love the " shark at the neck" line and also the " touch under short denim...pass it around"
There is a lazy camaraderie here that you capture very well.
As always you work makes me smile and think
Thank you
This brought back memories of days and people lost. ANd of a time and a place and a group and a moment when we were a little bit more than just us. Pass it around...
this posted elsewhere, read here it and enjoyed it again. Nice work.
"every one, a genius at midnight" <~ That's a great line Seattle. Thanks ;)
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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