All Comments on 'Gentle Strokes'

Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews

du lac~

Gently strokes of ink fill the page,

a bold flourish of completion

and you rise, stretch,

a warm smile illuminating your face

feels and tastes like sunshine as it rises off the morning horizon..*5+

and i like this bit a great deal:

Guiding me to a place of comfort,

our private symbiosis of two,

where dreams become reality,

lives and destinies merge.

*****

destiny creates a lot of drive. smooth write......don