All Comments on 'Give Me Twenty'

that poem is pretty hot!

than you poem yesterday. I must say, I have a had a difficult time finding the excellence that so many of the old poets here rave about in your work. You must have been very committed when you first began posting and now you have gained respect and stopped trying. This is pretty good though

These two stanzas:

Legs split with delight

Crow merrily alight.

Demons sings and groan

Dripping from the bone.

When exhales begin

And time moves to slow

The buttons find holes

And ties crease to bow.

Great poem, but I just love those 2 stanzas.

Glad you were inspired by the thread. :)