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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This time you seem to have outdone yourself,

which makes me want to ask, "Who actually wrote this?"

erectus123erectus123over 6 years agoAuthor
corrections....

these corrections are in the next to the last stanza.

devoured --should be- devour

Naked - should be- naked

stuck- should be- struck

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