All Comments on 'Glue'

Loved the flow of this poem. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.

TT

An interesting read...

Very Old Testament.

Very different from the usual erotic poem one finds here. Enjoyed it.

in a very good way. First stanza and last three lines...priceless. Good enuff to overcome the low points, I think.

Your poem has been recommended in the "New Poems" thread in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum on the Literotica Bulletin Board. Thank you for sharing it with us.

(And I know who you wrote it for, heehee)

Very different, nothing like any erotic poem that I've ever read. I liked it. Hope to read more of your work in the future.

You packed a lot of meaning into the poem. I'd like to read more. Please.

I Loved this. You wrote in such an expressive way that I can close my eyes and picture it exactly how you've penned it. I'd love to read more of your writing,CrackerjackHrt.

a dime a dozen. Stop writing.

I feel the same way. I love how you conveyed it, the sexual binding the emotional. Very powerful.