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I HAVE TO ADMIT TO PULLING OUT THE DICTIONARY SEVERAL TIMES ON THIS, NOT ALWAYS WITH SUCCESS (WHAT IS TORM?). I DEFINITELY GET THE CLASSICAL GREEK FEELING, LOVE YOUR PHRASING. BUT AM NOT 2 SURE ABOUT THE LAST 2 VERSES FITTING IN. SOMEHOW NEON LIGHTS GLARES A BIT TOO BRIGHT HERE.

a VERY ENJOYABLE READ THOUGH. THANK YOU

An imaginative narrative poem, love the last stanza. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

A classic from this wordsmith's mind;

Say the words with care

Lest your tongue trip over this clever write.

Tender in it's deceptive simplicity it flows along like a quiet stream on a summer day. Beautifully Written!

I enjoyed this one very much!

quality..melody to the soul ..lullaby of the heart..wonderful piece..thanks for sharing..blue

I am fast becoming a follower of your writes.

Love the visions here and the feeling of lost

and tarnished love. Great imagry~~!!

More Please ~

Thanks everyone so much for your comments!!

Just to clear up some questions I've gotten to make for better reading...

there are no spelling errors in this poem...

'teasers' and 'torms' are elements of classic theatre used to make the stage look smaller - I like to use theater a lot in my work...

I am suspicious of dictionaries; I've only seen two really good ones in my life.

And I really like the idea of Tireseus referencing "on broadway" in Hades... it puts a big ol' smile on my face....

wizard strikes again! Enjoyed the read thanks for sharing

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