All Comments on 'Going Down'

You like me to get teased

And him to get pleased

You may feel it'll offend me

Do you know it arouses me

His dick pounding your holes

His cream hitting right goals

It's dripping from your chin

I'm gonna lick that all clean

Gulping it with strange sound

Feeling that pound, pound, pound

Lovely poem, thanks for sharing and arousing and inspiring, @DampKitten

Oh my goodness. Evocative. Thank you

Opening stanza so perfect — dark corners where he hides. Yet, this entire scene is her perspective - her feelings about what is happening; her view of him — almost disdain (?). Captures the essence of today’s cuckoldry where a male (generally) enjoys his partner’s infidelity often accompanied by humiliation. Not sure he is enjoying this scene; she is. Maybe I’m over thinking, but nice work/tough theme. Well crafted.

Thank you both, Pranaykatha and pjbifem! I love those comments! That poem is especially awesome, Pran!

Love this!

Great to see your unbridled lust and cuckoldry in rhyme.

The fast-paced rhythm and lyricism carry the sexual energy.

You capture something well there - that erotic feeling known only to cuckolds xxxxx

You have a way with words and I'm guessing you've heard that before.

And you turn words into hammers and well describe the nail being struck.

I'm new here (neener neener two weeks before you)) but you are way more prolific and I'd also guess that two kids and RN and life, etc... you must be very organized. I have to wait for, sort of downloads. Not to sound too woo-woo but my creativity is either full on or full off but songs often just show up and end up written on a feed bag.

I will come back and read all your stuff but I have chickens on my deck getting uppity.

Oh what I would give to lick the creamy icing off your face.

I’m very impressed with your poem. Vert well done…..and HOT.

Awesome and hot poem…After a long tense day at work there is nothing I would more crave than a deep kiss, sampling the creamy icing, as your tongue is shoved forcefully into my throat..Cucked and owned..

JT

Just like DampKitten's cuckold,

My cuckold loves to see

His Hot Wife getting well fucked

By a nice big cock (or three!)

Ever since we started this life

Richard's been a willing cuck

And me? I adore being a Hot Wife

I was definitely born to fuck.

I've done it in hotel rooms,

At home, and in the open air

As long as I get a really good fuck,

The location's neither here nor there

But when my date is over,

And all is said and done,

I love going home to my cuckold

With a cunt that's full of cum.

And Richard, my loving cuckold

Is always waiting to eat

The cream pie that I bring him

And his face is a really comfy seat.

It’s seeing your hunger that I find irresistible. How it wells up till it overwhelms you and allows him to own you. Pulling you down and stripping you as your husband watches. I don’t have a defense against him when he owns my wife.

You sure know how to shake a man's world.

An excellent poem.

It arouses the Beast in me.

I do love my watching my wife being fucked.

We both know what's in store for her once he has finished.

Our hotel rooms echo from the start,

“Salty like the sea,” my favorite part.