- Erotic Poetry
- Going Down
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Click hereWhat is it
that drives you
into the deep dark corners
of dimly lit hotel rooms
where sultry sounds echo
through paper walls?
Penetrating sounds
that pound, pound, pound
like heavy hammers underground
as you watch me
watch me
going down…
watch me going down on him,
stroking, stroking
your little stem.
What pulls you in
when darkness falls?
He shoves it down my throat again!
Choking, choking
back the tears,
I take it all
and lick his balls
that slap against my chin,
never knowing if or when
he’ll shoot his load;
he’ll dump his load
right where you should have been.
I see you leaning in.
His dick is bigger than your own,
so much bigger!
And had you known,
would you have watched -
watched me sucking on his cock?
Has jealousy turned you into stone?
I read you like a book.
And now, my love,
his seeds are sown –
so, take a look…
The creamy icing on my face,
he left for you.
Just have a taste!
It’s foamy, salty like the sea
that keeps you swimming back to me
through crashing waves
that pound, pound, pound
like heavy hammers underground…
- COMMENTS
RebRouser2 months agoAn excellent poem.
It arouses the Beast in me.
I do love my watching my wife being fucked.
We both know what's in store for her once he has finished.
Anonymous3 months agoIt’s seeing your hunger that I find irresistible. How it wells up till it overwhelms you and allows him to own you. Pulling you down and stripping you as your husband watches. I don’t have a defense against him when he owns my wife.
HottieOlwen3 months agoJust like DampKitten's cuckold,
My cuckold loves to see
His Hot Wife getting well fucked
By a nice big cock (or three!)
Ever since we started this life
Richard's been a willing cuck
And me? I adore being a Hot Wife
I was definitely born to fuck.
I've done it in hotel rooms,
At home, and in the open air
As long as I get a really good fuck,
The location's neither here nor there
But when my date is over,
And all is said and done,
I love going home to my cuckold
With a cunt that's full of cum.
And Richard, my loving cuckold
Is always waiting to eat
The cream pie that I bring him
And his face is a really comfy seat.
Anonymous3 months agoAwesome and hot poem…After a long tense day at work there is nothing I would more crave than a deep kiss, sampling the creamy icing, as your tongue is shoved forcefully into my throat..Cucked and owned..
JT
JodieToday3 months agoYou have a way with words and I'm guessing you've heard that before.
And you turn words into hammers and well describe the nail being struck.
I'm new here (neener neener two weeks before you)) but you are way more prolific and I'd also guess that two kids and RN and life, etc... you must be very organized. I have to wait for, sort of downloads. Not to sound too woo-woo but my creativity is either full on or full off but songs often just show up and end up written on a feed bag.
I will come back and read all your stuff but I have chickens on my deck getting uppity.
Pixiehoff3 months agoYou capture something well there - that erotic feeling known only to cuckolds xxxxx
Paul4play3 months agoLove this!
Great to see your unbridled lust and cuckoldry in rhyme.
The fast-paced rhythm and lyricism carry the sexual energy.
DampKitten3 months agoAuthorThank you both, Pranaykatha and pjbifem! I love those comments! That poem is especially awesome, Pran!
Migbird3 months agoOpening stanza so perfect — dark corners where he hides. Yet, this entire scene is her perspective - her feelings about what is happening; her view of him — almost disdain (?). Captures the essence of today’s cuckoldry where a male (generally) enjoys his partner’s infidelity often accompanied by humiliation. Not sure he is enjoying this scene; she is. Maybe I’m over thinking, but nice work/tough theme. Well crafted.
pranaykatha3 months agoYou like me to get teased
And him to get pleased
You may feel it'll offend me
Do you know it arouses me
His dick pounding your holes
His cream hitting right goals
It's dripping from your chin
I'm gonna lick that all clean
Gulping it with strange sound
Feeling that pound, pound, pound
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing and arousing and inspiring, @DampKitten
