All Comments on 'Going Home With a Smile on My Face'

by Bill Dada

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LuciousBi-Writes4U almost 19 years ago

.....you

come up with the coolest thoughts! LOL

;)

obscure but poignant!

kisses,

KOLKORE over 16 years ago

never coming to the same/different home

Who said you can't catch a flow? If any one can Bill Dada is the one. I actually did not find the content obscure. perhaps hard to catch in words but not obscure. It reminded me of past times when I was transitioning between work at night shift and home. The flow of thoughts at that stage seemed to be somewhat less defined compared to other times...not unlike in this poem.

LeBroz almost 16 years ago

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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