All Comments on 'Good Friday'

by steve porter

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
interesting

have you ever googled God?

I have and He was there, in fact

everywhere. Sometimes I imagine Him

watching, writing in His book

taking names, counting just

how many times I have peed

in my life; I hope He fills

that "book" with something

other than mundane facts

of my existance.

~~~

TzaraTzaraalmost 18 years ago
Nice little satire, Mr. Porter.

Pointed, as satire should be. Nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Witty

I loved the sarcastic tone of the narrator, adds a nice touch to the poem. An enjoyable poem, mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

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